Critique/Comment Help

What is the difference between a comment and a critique? Well, functionally posting a critique will force you to "rate" the piece on a scale of 1-5 (see the rating guidelines for rating explanations) and posting a comment will not. However, there is a difference in meaning between the two as well. A critique is intended to be an actual analysis of the piece of writing which informs the writer how he/she can improve it based on certain writing rules and styles. A critique should contain as little personal opinion as possible and should focus mainly on what works and what does not. Now, I say that personal opinion should be left out, but that is not to say that you should not suggest improvements that may make it sound or flow better. For example, "I like the second line, but perhaps rewording the third line will make it clearer what you meant there." is an opinion and a suggestion. This is okay. However, posting something like "Dude, this was really cool!" should probably be reserved for the comments section! If you would like to know more about how to critique something. Keep reading. If you have suggestions or comments about this help page, please email the penmaster.

How to Critique a Piece

1. Most writers are not necessarily looking for grammatical corrections unless they are developing their final version. Instead provide feedback about how the story is progressing or how the poem is developing. However, do not feel that you cannot comment on grammar. Offer suggestions where helpful.
2. Sometimes a piece of writing stirs up strong emotions. In this case, try to express how the piece affected you and convey that as opposed to lashing out at the writer. Perhaps the intent is to have that very affect on the audience. Sometimes submissions may have been made with the sole intent of just raising a debate. Read the story's note section for more information regarding the submission.
3. Look for parts of the writing that do not flow well and possibly make suggestions for re-wording or improvement.
4. Try to envision what it is that the writer is drawing a picture of. Is that picture clear? Can it be understood enough to follow the piece?
5. Ask questions. Most writers enjoy talking about their work.
6. Overall, have fun. This site has multiple purposes. One is to build a resource for writers to practice and discuss their work. Not everyone has the time or luxury to attend writing groups or classes. This allows you to participate when you have time. It is intended for the writer to receive helpful feedback about their submissions and also to have a general forum to discuss whatever comes to mind.